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If I was never Born (S.S. For Sandy--Apples ) by A-n-t-e-n-o-r-A

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Anatomy is mostly fair. His left arm seems a bit skewed and his nose (and face anatomy) is a bit scrunched together. Sand effect is very nice, especially the level of detail with the family. The background is obviously not the focus but it is slightly jarring to look at in comparison to the rest of the picture. I suggest more work can be done on it. The light rays are also very well done though it makes me question if shadows are in front or behind Gaara (it seems like the direction of the light is a little ambiguous). Gaara's eyes do not appear to be looking at the family so maybe that could be an improvement too? Overall a nice piece thou :)
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